• Videos must not have an audio track. You'll have to remove that with an external program
• LAM did the illustrations, put them as background and cover source
• You misspelled "lane switches" in the tags, also maybe just put "lane switch" instead? or both
• I would also add "LN" to tags since the map is very heavy on those
• The map feels too hard for how short it is, you should make an easier version
• I would put Acc and HP difficulty a bit lower

Mapping:

• In general, your patterning is quite inconsistent throughout the map. You use different patterns for the same sounds (for example 8745, 14359, 64885, and 70500 being completely different), please go through the whole map and try to fix up the consistency
• There's also quite a few stray notes and inconsistent LN lengths so look out for those too
• Offset should be 1201
• 1201 should be a double
• Why is 4008 a double hold instead of chip + hold?
• 4359 should be double - single - double instead of single - double - double
• Change 5061 to a double
• At 5587, you use triples and then at 61728, and 117868 you use doubles and a lane switch instead, those three should all be the same pattern
• I think the LNs at 10850 should end at 11201 instead
• 11903 should be a single LN
• Similar issues as before in the part at 18219, you use a lot of double LNs which seem to try to match the piano chords (24184, 24885, 26289) but leave the pairs incomplete (18570, 19271, 19973, 20675, 25587) or have doubles where there is no reason to (19096, 19798, 20500, 23833, 26114)
• The chorus has a few notes where I don't understand why they're there (41201, 41552, 41903, 42254, 42605, 43219)
• 44008 needs to be a double
• 47342 should start at 47429
• Same problems as above in the chorus at 96640
• Why are the LNs at 63131 streams
• 72254 should end at 72429
• The short LN at 74710 should end at 74885, same thing at 76114
• You don't follow the pattern of short + long LN at 79447, 80324, and 80850
• No reason to have the two LNs at 82429, but you could move them up a bit to 82605
• Add a pair of tick notes at 88043
• Why are the LNs at 119271, 119622, and 125236 streams

Effects:

• The vignette at the start feels a bit too dark IMO. Try turning it down a tiny bit, maybe ~0.4?
• The dark part at 74184 is cool conceptually, though it feels weird how it suddenly stops for a bit at 76991 so probably do the same effect there too
• The playfield movements at 42429 and 48043 are slightly different for seemingly no reason, those should match (same problem in the part starting 96640)